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Post by mysticbluebell on Aug 11, 2014 7:57:03 GMT
It sure is easy to write about this actual theme Rolling Thunder
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Post by doreen23 on Aug 11, 2014 20:05:12 GMT
A stormy Night
I hide under blankets As sky turns black But my room is light I think I’m being attacked
As thunder rumbles The wind does howl Rain is pouring down Hot air does scowl
The sound of a storm In the middle of the night The sky does shake And I saw a flash of light
Crashing and smashing The waves of the sea Sailors do struggle To get home for tea
Thunder and lightening Rain pouring down On this extra cold night Making loud sound
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Post by doreen23 on Aug 11, 2014 20:15:47 GMT
The sound of thunder in the distance Dark clouds in the night sky thunder rolling, lightening screams for sky is black, oh, so high
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Post by puddles on Aug 12, 2014 14:02:28 GMT
Well done Dee, I hear the sounds of a storm in your write, you convey this thought so clearly.
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Post by puddles on Aug 12, 2014 14:34:13 GMT
Rolling Thunder
I hear the roar of thunder which rambles in the sky it rolls and makes me wonder as my heart begins to sigh Against the background of the sea lightning flashes within the clouds igniting the fears inside of me exposing my many doubts Then morning comes all is calm a rainbow is what's left within the morning dawn a sign for us his promise kept
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Post by doreen23 on Aug 12, 2014 14:40:18 GMT
After reading the first part of your poem Puddles I was glad to see the rainbow Really enjoyed the read Thank you
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Post by puddles on Aug 12, 2014 14:55:02 GMT
Thanks so much Dee, your words is appreciated.
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Post by mysticbluebell on Aug 16, 2014 17:44:21 GMT
Doreen and Roland, I liked your descriptions, vivid and also stirring thoughts, thank you!
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Post by mysticbluebell on Aug 16, 2014 17:44:58 GMT
Rolling Thunder
Lightning flash towards the earth Called by demons, could this be? Old Oak trees stretch out their arms Waiting for rain’s symphony
Waters patter down in torrents The soil is struggling to swallow Darkness turns to almost daylight Then the thunder choirs follow
The Oak trees groan but stand firm In this hailing loud down pour It feels like a nature’s judgement Mere power reminding us with roar
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Post by puddles on Aug 16, 2014 20:09:07 GMT
Mystic, another fine poem about thunder rolling across the sky, a power that comes in the sounds of the wind.
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