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Post by mysticbluebell on Oct 19, 2014 21:03:43 GMT
To what whispers are you listening? Whispers |
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Post by puddles on Oct 20, 2014 16:20:16 GMT
Oh, Mystic, this is a good theme, will give it a try.
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Post by puddles on Oct 20, 2014 16:36:03 GMT
Whispers
Within the elements which we sigh
laments the fabric of one's mind
lampoons the whispers soulful cry
which roams sweet memories intertwined
(this is the beginning of my latest poem, have been in a writer's block lately, and I needed some outside help in getting a beginning for a poem, thank you Mysitc, now I need to add some more stanzas to this one)
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Post by doreen23 on Oct 20, 2014 18:45:05 GMT
Interesting Mine is not too good but I have had a go at the subjectWhisper
Whisper, whisper, hear that sound
Just let’s see what is around
Whisper in my ear
Say that you love me
Just like the wind
Whispers to the trees
Hush, hush I cannot hear
So please whisper in my ear
Secrets softly awoken
Whispers are quietly spoken
Let me whisper my love to the wind
So it will tell all mankind.
Doreen 2014
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Post by puddles on Oct 21, 2014 0:12:46 GMT
Dee, your words whispers sweet love embedded within the wind, nice one Dee.
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Post by william on Oct 25, 2014 14:19:01 GMT
I liked everybody's "Whispers", good theme Mystic
william
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Post by mysticbluebell on Oct 26, 2014 9:09:18 GMT
Thank you Doreen, Roland and William for leaving your foot prints!
My 'Whispers' is posted to the poetry page this time.
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